Earlier on this week, I handed in my draft of my feature article to be marked by my teacher. As I am doing a interview, I had to get my aritsts personalities across. Once speaking to my teacher, she has told me that I have done but the answers are not long enough and are more toward the gossip side then the music side. As I have been given feedback, I am know going to write my article again and hand it back in to my teacher. I am happy with my article but want it to be right so the next few days - 9th, 10th and 11th of December, I am going to spend re-drafting my article.
This is the first draft of my article which has been marked and handed back to me, I have been told that my article is good and I am useing a good range of different languages but my article is leaning more towards an article for a gossip magazine not a music magazine. I was also told that I didn't include the name of my groups new album and single which I know I have to include.I have also been told that I have got across the groups personalitys very well in my interview as I know that is very hard to do. Overall, my teacher is happy with my article but it just needs some changing which I am going to do and hand in again for another check. I am going to change some of my spellings and make my answeres longer, which I have been suggested to do so. Also, I will change around some of my answers and make some of my questions more professional.
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